My Dear Future Readers,
I’m still here doing edits for Book 1: Forbidden Love.
I finally got to the chapters about Amy’s younger brother. These are the fun chapters because he goes on adventures. He gets to travel which to be honest is a lot of fun to write. I don’t travel much which is why I wanted to let my characters do a little exploring.
Now, that I have to rewrite Eric’s parts in the book, I only hope that I have been able to make his chapters more fun. Yes, Eric finds love too. Don’t worry. I did not leave him without a lovely lady. But the best part of rewriting a story where the little brother of my main character gets to live his life, is that I can see and show that even he has a life.
Rewrites of Eric’s Travels
Eric’s traveling adventures were parts of the story where I could really use my imagination. Why? Because, he could travel anywhere and meet all kinds of people and creatures. Sometimes I just need to be creative. You know what….. I think my creativity in these parts paid off.
Here is what my editor had to say about Eric’s story.
“I like the progression of Eric’s storyline.” -Alyssa Nand
I think that if my editor likes it, then it will be interesting to my future readers. I always believed that if I could make at least one person fall in love with my story and that person being my editor then I already did a good job as an author.
Rewrites of Eric’s Love Story
I think that rewriting the scenes with Princess Sapphira made the chapters romantic and sweet. I really hope that you will like the rewrites. Eric’s story seems to be better with all of the work that I did. I think his story fits in with the rest of the book because it shows how his own love story played out.
I look forward to hearing from you soon. I thank you all for your infinite support.
YA Fantasy Romance Published Author